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Surprises Await Us

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Ok, so there are two reasons for the title.

1- This was taken with my cellphone who's resolution can go up to the dimensions of this pic o.o im a bit surprised at this lol; not normal for phone cameras.

and 2- I was up near Salem, MA this past summer for a family reunion and stayed at a really run-down hotel in the middle of town (I forget which town we stayed in.) This was the view from the back @.@

Signature added in PS as always.

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Comments, criticism, tips, etc much appreciated! ^^
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Make
LG Electronics, Inc.
Model
LG-VN250
Date Taken
Jun 25, 2010, 8:59:49 PM
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mikhi's avatar
Your work was moved to the 5-7 folder :D Here's a brief reason why:
The place is beautiful. I love the trees in contrast to the water and grass. There a couple things that could make this photo even better: the rail toward the bottom is angled so that it doesn't look perfectly straight even if it may be. If you tilt that so that the columns don't show up, it will stop being a distraction when you want the eye to focus on the nature. Also take a look into composition and the rule of thirds. According to that, a little bit more of the grass in the frame will add something unconscious that will make the shot more appealing. Also I'm not sure what you want to emphasize in this picture, the tree or the background. If it's both, then great but If its one or the other I suggest looking into Depth of Focus so that you can blur out what is not the main focus which draws the eye into what you want the viewer to see. :D Overall nice~

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